rockets
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Make a list with the materials the builder will have to supply.
If the instructions will be printed and included with the kits, add a QR code to go with links.
I personally feel that the font size is too large.
Some of the "LET DRY"s should be "LET CURE." ------------Hmm, what do you mean?? I didn't know there was a difference between the two..-----------
Part 9: What paint scheme above? --------I added that!! -----------
Part 5: I would have the user poke a hole with a hobby knife and superglue isn't the best way to attach. -------I fixed that!-----------
You don't mention how to use the clay. If this was someone's first kit that requires it, would they know what to do? ---------------"I have had it in step one: here it is::::: PART ONE:
Open the package holding the clay, and roll it into a ball, use a pen or dowel and push the clay to the tip of inside the nose cone."---------------
Plastic cement works for the nose cone as well. I would even say it to be favorable against the other options.
You need a LOT more detail. For instance, in motor mount assembly you have hardly any detail and some of the units are off. 4" is longer than a standard 18mm motor. Include mm conversions for the units and more measurements or blueprint quality drawings. The LL line is not centered in the drawing, it should be [root(2)]/2 units from the center assuming the rectangle representing the BT is 2 units tall. Is there a glassine ring for the motor hook?
And lastly, I'm going to try to put more detail in.. I have the --------- surrounding what I said about what you thought...
Thanks,